The beginning great! But now im curiouse what will happen next! |
A brillaint start, and a subject I feel very strongly about myself. Wow, wow and wow, you really have this one love. I will be looking forward to part two, I wish it wasn't this way, I wish people didn't label that way because either they label wrong, or people change themselves to fit the label, either way it is a negative thing. Great poem love. |
Aww really sad...cnt wait till part 2! lol i luv u babe always and forever |
by Cody
I love it and I cant wait for part 2 |
by Nee
Hello huni! |
by Nee
Hello huni! |
by Avellana
I feel that, the labeling. You're 'diferent'' therefore it's their excuse. Grr. |
Wow... this poem was incredible, I liked it alot. 5/5 |
by Carlee Ann
Wow, good write, I'm looking forward to part two. You have a unique style - refreshing. Good job! |