Hey gorgus
this is a awsum poem ;) keep i up 5/5

Very good peice, though the word "you" seemed slightly overused, but this didn't really effect the overall peice in any adverse mannor.

5/5

Thanks for my comment. this poems good. when do you write your poem.

Hey wonderful poem, it had such feeling and depth. I really like your style, very unique. Thank you very much for the comment on my poem, and about my eye make up lol. Meant alot to me =D

Anyways great write, keep up the awesome work! 5/5

~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Wow. Even better! Wicked good job. Keep it up I can't believe you think you're bad!!!!! 5/5