by Lexi May 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Cuttings my obsession |
by Miss Pipp
I can relate. this poem has heaps of emotion in it and i love it. good job |
by DeathlyAmore
Hmm, is this based on your actual feelings? comment back!, or, e-mail me, JLSamuel818@aol.com |
Not too bad though not too good. I did like how it started out with the repetition of the first line. Some of the words...well not exactly captivating. I favor the first stanza which started strong. |
Aww ... really sad but a great job |
Awww ur so cute... i added you to maii favourite k.... |