I really liked this poem it shows struggles in life. it's good.
cassie

Good peice well written with good progression and content.

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Aww ... really sad but a great job

Not too bad though not too good. I did like how it started out with the repetition of the first line. Some of the words...well not exactly captivating. I favor the first stanza which started strong.
~Fallen

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I can relate. this poem has heaps of emotion in it and i love it. good job

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