by Sole May 2, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sleeping in the street once more |
by xxmichaelxx
Really kool like tha other one! write more lyrics! it's awesome! |
I really like this. I really don't have much comment to say about it, and let me explain why. I have a difficult time commenting on/rating songs, mostly because in order to truly appreciate a song usually you need to be able to hear it as well as/instead of read it. The musical accompaniment is usually necessary. This is probably the first song-poem on here that I didn't feel like I needed that for. It was good on it's own right. Fantastic job :) |
by Vegetable
This was pretty good! Very emotional and honest. Good work. However some of the rhymes were a little choppy and predictable. But it was still very good. |
by Sean Dohr
"Random," sums up this song, and that's what makes a song great! I love it!!! |
Nice work, there were a few lines that didnt seem to fit, but overall, good job! |