X Are you?

by Sole   May 2, 2006


Are you happy, friend?
Or do you cover with a smile?

Are you happy, friend?
Or are you falling all the while?

Are you hurting friend?
I never meant to strike so deep

Are you hurting, friend?
Do I haunt you in your sleep?

Are you laughing, friend?
Or are you crying down inside?

Are you laughing, friend?
Or are you trying hard to hide?

Are you dying friend?
Are you lying, are you true?

Are you dying, friend?
Because deep down I love you too

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Woh. This poem has really sent shivers down my spine. I love it, it is so powerfully written, the layout is great, and I love the way you have rhymed it. I don't know what to say, I love it and I think you are a great poet from what I've read! 5/5
    - Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Yet again this was also very sweet, I as I'm sure many people can relate to this all too well. it had a great concept to it it is the best one I have read so far! good job

    Chanelle--

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    Great poem!! I love the writing style!! I loved it all!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Awww!!! I loved this! Wow you seem like a great friend! I loved the last stanza and this one "Are you hurting friend?
    I never meant to strike so deep"

    Truely Amasing, i love reading your work.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    I almost feel there is no need for rhyme in this poem, since it doesn't help the flow. Could have had more meaning without the rhyme. Still, a well structured poem. Nice write!

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