Excellent write with a really pacy style helped greatly by a choppy and considered use of enjambment and couplets. Really great poem with some beautiful imagery, 5/5!

I really like it. There are a couple lines that, personally, I probably would have left as one instead of broken up into two but I'm not the poet so ignore me. ;)

Thanks for the comments. That was a beautiful write. I really loved all the imagery. Keep up the great work.

-Tamra