Anything you want to say

by Kaylalala   May 2, 2006


I thought about you
All last night
I just can\'t get you
Off of my mind

How do I tell you
Let you know how I feel
Wonder what you\'ll say
Or not say at all

Take me in your arms
Or push me away
But let me say
What I have to say

Speak in your ear
Just a slight whisper
Send a chill
Up and down your spine

I\'ll tell you like this
Read you this poem
Then let you say
Anything you want to say

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  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Thats very short and sweet!,

    it fitted beauitfully
    well done
    dave x

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Thats very short and sweet!,

    it fitted beauitfully
    well done
    dave x

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    I really loved the style of this poem, the slightly irregular rhyming pattern gives a rather disjointed slant which emphasises the slightly obscure tone of the poem. Although designed to be an expression of feeling the poem gives little away whilst telling the reader exactly what you want. I particularly liked the 3rd stanza where the use of couplets gives the poem a really snappy feel. Great write, 5/5 x

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