Untitled *need help with a title!!*

by Raychel   May 2, 2006


Trembling hands,
realize fate.
as they realize they have the power,
to end my hate.

shivering body,
is afraid to die,
when its apendeges near a razor,
it begins to cry.

numb legs,
walk closer and closer,
to death,
getting weaker with every breath.

my mind is blank,
but filled with answers,
to the reason of control,
over a single death.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Miyuki(Nicole)

    How about.. Bias or Indifferent as a title..

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Well I dont know what title to put it so sorry I cant help.... but the poem was stiil great . Keep it up!
    -cheers- ^_^