If you could see my bloody tears

by ShaunaMarie   May 2, 2006


If you could just see my bloody tears,
You would realize all my fears,
Have come to reality,
If I could fill my life with cheers,
If I could gather all my tears,
Id drown you in them...

i know it's short but just read and rate please!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Good job shauna! we do need to hang out more, in and outta school.. i think someones jealous *not me*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Even though it is very short it contains a lot of power and feeling. very well written with a smooth flow and good expression and strength within your words.

    5/5