Wow, a great poem. I liked this alot. 5/5

Though skilfully put together but too dark . my advise try to rise and put the oast behind it may hurt or take time but believe it's wut your heart trully wants

love

What a beautiful poem you have written, the way you have made this poem rhyme really brings it out. I could relate to this poem in a lot of ways
take care and well done

dave x

Thats really good, when u put ur words down they come together so well great work keep it up xox me

Hell0 luv. great j0b 0n this p0em. a t0uching piece with em0ti0n. a great use 0f w0rds in this 0ne straight fr0m the heart. very well written keep em c0ming. always uv reading ur w0rk!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Hold on, it'll work out! Hope you set the pain free very soon.

Love,
Line

My dearest Nitin,
First of all let me start by saying that I'm so glad you posted this poem. I am in love with this poem of yours. Its so well written and so heartfelt, anyone who reads it can feel the pain and it will hit them right in their guts. Layers of Pain... absolutely brilliant title and the poem itself is a masterpiece. Keep writing, I'm addicted to your masterpieces. :-)

Love
Michelle

Its amazing!!
with no doubt..you're so brilliant the way you write your poems..you impress me ;)
keep it up
x0x0x0x

Wow! gr8 job done as usual. sorry 4 commenting late dear.but really ur work is always praise worthy. keep writing!

luv
Bharti

Hey thanks for you last comment on my poem. your an amazing poet. someone like you should be expressing poems like this to the world. Your extremly more than talented

I could feel the pain right from the title to the last line!!
what a brilliant use and flow of words....
simply love the way its written
5/5 :-)

love
purva

The flow is nice
very good poem

The pain in this piece is so very deep. It reached out and grabbed my heart. You have written it in a great way. Pulling the reader right in. The tears flowed as I read your poem. I hope one day you get the kind of love you are looking for. Take Care Your Friend Cindy