by Sole May 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As the snow falls, the frost tumbles down |
by Sean Dohr
Usually, it is sort of difficult to follow the ABAB rhyme scheme to a "T," but you were able to do it. Impressive! |
Beautifull poem, really, but just so you know, some of the punctiation got distorted into boxes lol (along with some other characters) so ya might wanna fix that ;) |
by Fallen Angel
Another great poem excellently written, your imagery is just stunning. A truely beautiful piece, 5/5! "By the figure with the fiery gaze |
by Jackie Marie
Another great poem Sole. I gave this piece a 5/5. Great job. It was very sweet and has a great structure and flow. :) |
Excellent written. |