This was such a beautiful poem, I don't see how it is rated only a 4. I can really relate to this one (which sucks considering what the poem is about lol) but I loved it. Itw as well written and had a good flow. I love how you really capture your feelings in your writing...it helps us to feel what you are feeling. I hope you get some more poetry up soon because you are one of my favorites...I can't wait to read mre of your work...hopefully soon. (^_^)
Great job, beautiful poem.
5/5
Breanna