Twisted Point of View

by *Cosmic*Whispers*   May 2, 2006


Look at all the pretty shades
Of the deepest black and blue
Swarming all around me
As the darkness I fall through

Look at all the angels
As they're falling from the sky
Once white wings burned to ashes
They hit the cold hard earth & die

Watch the scarlet river
As it washes away the pain
Hide the gleaming blade
The only thing that keeps me sane

See the teardrops glisten
As they drop onto the ground
One moment of pure perfection
Among the heartache all around

Kiss away the anguish
Let the feeling soothe your heart
Make the blissful moment last
Before it tears your world apart

Feel his hands upon your skin
Tracing your scars with his fingers
It's only your virginity he takes
But all the pain he caused still lingers

Drink away your problems
Numb the tattered soul inside
Laugh like you're a child again
Even if you want to run and hide

It's all insignificant
It doesn't matter what you do
This is just an insight to my mind
A warped girls twisted point of view

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  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Flowed beautifully-the wrods just fit perfectly-this makes so much sense-another one to love :]-keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Ahh, wow. There are not a lot of words to describe how much I like this poem. It's soo good, I really really liked it. The rhyme scheme is incredible and completely unforced.

    Great Work!

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I don't really know what to say about this one...but it was amazing...I understand how you feel...your a natural at poetry..keep it up, your very good.

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is so good.. im really speechless.. great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Omg. wow. i loved it! So brilliant i loved everything baout it.
    Much loves.

    Amberinaa*

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