Wow this is really good!!! i dont know what to really say im speechless

Omg. wow. i loved it! So brilliant i loved everything baout it.
Much loves.

Amberinaa*

Wow that is so good.. im really speechless.. great job on this!

I don't really know what to say about this one...but it was amazing...I understand how you feel...your a natural at poetry..keep it up, your very good.

Breanna

Ahh, wow. There are not a lot of words to describe how much I like this poem. It's soo good, I really really liked it. The rhyme scheme is incredible and completely unforced.

Great Work!

x.xBrokenx.x

Flowed beautifully-the wrods just fit perfectly-this makes so much sense-another one to love :]-keep it up!