A really powerful and well penned poem. The feelings you have are very clearly conveyed through what is a very well written poem of the darker side of friendship. The ending really helps to draw the poem to a close and shows that despite secrets or problems that friendship always prevails, brilliant "Your kindness, always glows
Someone I could never hate" x

Great work, loved it! it rhymed and flowed perfectly, just really great poem!

I love this a lot....you have very good poems..actually let me rephrase that...you have very great poems!!!

Hahaha, sounds sooo close to many of my poems, that I feel I'm staring at something I've written. LOVED IT!

WOW!!!!!

Another emotional piece that was written from the bottom of your heart. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Aw I loved this poem! It flowed so well, i could even listen to my music while reading to it, and usually i have to turn it off :P. Great work on this poem, i especially liked this lines

"It's hard to see your motives
Suffocation, under siege
It's hard to tell your time
To see what you believe"

-Steph

Wow!! I LOVE this poem!! I can totally relate to it!!
It's hard to know your feelings, as you leave the room alone, I dont' know how to comfort, my confidence is thrown-

Great Great work!! My husband needs to read this!!! 5/5

Cute friendship poem. Good job writing this. It is a little confusing to me though because it talks how this person keeps everything to herself but then she is always open...I don't know I am confusing myself.
You did a good job though. keep it up.

>black&&blue

This is very sweet but a little confusing. Some parts were clear and others not so much! the thought behind it was great but, other then that it was good!!

Chanelle---