Empty girl

by Hey Brittknee   May 2, 2006


The emptiness inside
Behind the tears cried
Sits a beautiful girl
With her mind set in a whirl

She sits behind a closed door
Doesn't want to move forward anymore
Doesn't want to look back
While she sits topped in her tracks

What goes on inside her puzzled mind,
Is yet for you and I to find
So take her hand
She'll take you to another land

She'll show you what is going on
Whose there and who's gone
Who will never be there anymore

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I enjoyed the emotion here a lot...stil ur so talented..keep up the amamzing work..i rly respect what you do...amamzing.

    Lissa xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by struggling

    Another great poem you are a really great poet. Love this and all ur other poems keep up the good work.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Another great poem.5/5