Silent Voices

by Renee Kotva   May 2, 2006


Silent voices echo in my head
they say things that twist my mind
they tell me I'm better off dead
that my love again I will never find

they grow louder each day
silently speaking in the night
saying I might as well not pray
that God won't help me fight

I let my mind unfold
and my pain fall away
I try not to listen to what I'm told
as to my savior I pray

the voices tells me my fate
I try to let go of his memories
but I'm afraid its too late
praying hard I fall to my knees

begging God to take this burden
I'm falling through cracks in life
I don't want all the pain again
and can't take this pain and strife

take these silent voices
from my mind
let me make the right choices
so that content is what I'll find

the silent voices echo in my head
help me Lord to not remember what the said

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Well your poem is unqiue in a sense that they it came up with new theme. i enjoyed reading you poem.

    all the best,,,,

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wooowee thatslike ooober amazing!
    ooo i doo know how you feel!='[
    keep smiling =] &&writing poems =]
    love love alice
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Oh wow, absolutely breathtaking. I just love this one. The Silent voices... love the theme and the title... and yes, everyone's got those in their minds which are really hard to get rid of, but nothing is impossible in life, face life with a smile and you'll see life is smiling back at you. :-)

    Excellent piece.
    Best Wishes Always
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    An ultimate piece of art here dear, just loved this one so much. Full of sadness and emotions and realities too...but then thats what life is all abt.

    Great write
    take care and all the best forever
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Dude...this is so good!!! 5/5!!! i love it!!! i understand completely!!! GREAT JOB!!!

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