by ShaunaMarie May 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A broken, shattered, twisted heart, |
Wow, this poem was really good one of my favorites of yours. Im proud of you shauna, you really our working hard at your writing. I love you allways- Meg |
Amazingly well thought out peice with some real power within it. the idea is good and well utilised and the structure and flow very smooth and perfectly done. the content really is fantasticly clear with some strong expression and ideas. |