Hey thanx 4 the comment on mi poem.
great poem def 5/5
xxmel

Luv it! keep writing!

Thanks for the comment on mine.

No feeling, do I receive

That line doesn't do well with the coma after feeling. Comas add a pause, which I don't think is needed right there. Just my opinion. Otherwise, this poem is great! I enjoyed it. I loved how you let your desperate emotion out to the readers. Keep writing!