Hey nice write check out some of my poems please and i'll keep looking at yours i'll comment on ones that draw my attention well, instead of just saying crying tears of blood the flow would have been better with
tears of blood
stream down my face
from eyes holding
back the pain
well anyways good write keep on letting the poems flow

Very powerful and expressive, the flow was disrupted in placeas but quickly recovers. fantastic content.

5/5

Wow..i feel it