Nice job! =/ i wonder why u didn't get a 5 for this?? o well .. i thought u did a great job! well keep up the good work :P
-Steven

This is really really good. i love the last line!
emotional, but always retains its dignity. which is hard to do, and shows ur talent. well done xx

Some real powerfull stuff here. you can really feel the emotion.. niced work

Hey thanx for commenting on my poem =) i wanted to return the fav and do the same!! i love this poem alot!! it sounds like sumthin i wud write

You so talented i love it .. i rate it 5/5 :D amazing job

This is really good...the first stanza is my favorite...i read like 5 of your poems and this was my favorite but you are a very good poet...i really enjoy your stuff...5/5