by Lollypop May 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I lay on the ground, |
by susie
Very good work, but u know there are a lot of people here who care about u. im here if u need to talk:) |
Wow! Wonderful poem! You really expressed yourself very well! |
Fantastic peice,, so wonderfully written and powerfully portrayed. the expressions in it are amazingly strong and the structure perfect. |