AWESOME!

Wow this is an amazing poem. It touched me. I love the feeling put into it. Great job, keep up the awesome work I hope to read more. 5/5

I really like this, it's written with a lot of emotion and has a nice flow.
However, there are a few typo's...
In the title, first line, and first line of the last stanza it should be "Pain and sorrow". Sorrowness isn't a word.
Then in this line:

"i see the story's in my scars"

It should be "I seen the stories in my scars".
Also, you need to capitalize your I's. Other than those few things, it's really good.
Take care and keep it up~Holly
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