by Fallen~Tears May 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Her memory he cant seem to erase |
Very cute poem... I feel just like this with my love. Great job explaining it. Excellent. |
by Bloomed Rose
AAWWWWWWWWWWWWW! sad, but sweet! very good with your flow! keep it up! |
by Clarissa
This poem is excellent because it feels like it's a whole story on it's own |
Very well written peice, full of feeling and clearly expressed. the wy you managed to contain so many emotions seemlessly is incrediable, fantastically implimented ideas in this peice |
Excellent poem, I gave you a 5:D |