by RachelAnne May 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I am wind, |
by lana
I love this poem |
by brkendown
Its good but i think it could use some more details, just to bring it to life! |
by Moose
For me it was TOO repetitive, reading every line and seeing I, I, I, I, kinda took the spunk out of the poem. ANd also the flow was a little off. You could tell you had a lot of good ideas when you were writing this, but It doesnt seem like you finished them out. 4/5 |
by Imogen
I love this poem. its really clever. the lines are short but they convey a lot of meaning. 5/5 and you're on my faves! |
by Ike Dizzle
I liked it. But if it was me. I would have ended it in a sad way. like your last stanza. |