Tell Our Lies

Leave your lies
Lying around the room
The spirit dies
In darkness, we loom

We hold on strong
The hope we had
In remorse, I am fond
In sorrow, I am sad

Hair in my eyes
Covering my view
In the wind, it flys
The sun has many hues

Facing each other
Trying to look inside
I see my lover
But sorrow beside

I hope you see
The happiness I feel
It is the masters key
To make my heart heal

Clutch my hand
Feel this hope within
Try and understand
Why I now must sin

Hold me close
As I tell my own lies
The love in your eyes slowly dies

"I'm sorry"
I whisper
You turn away in a hurry
No longer your loving helper

You walk away
There is no point of calling
I know what your going to say
The tears keep falling

On that day
We told each other our secrets
But things I had to say
Make me have regrets

Now you know
And now you leave
The lies I had to show
You honour I decieve

Alone in my room
Slowly quaking with tears
The feeling of doom
Such pure fears

I leave my lies
Lying around the room
Your love dies
In darkness, alone, I loom

Comparing how I feel
To the way the Sun sets
It doesnt sound so real
With your love, I have many debts

There is no more bond
For the hope we had
In remorse, I am fond
INn sorrow, I am sad

Please comment on this poem, so I know if I need to improve on my writing skills. Thanks