by Heather May 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I sit here in the sunshine, |
by Rachel
*Crying* No...umm I like this one a LOT! Keep it up! |
by Jenny
Still awsome i hope u love mine as much as i love urs |
by StormShadow
I love the 2nd stanza of this poem, its so good, and the last stanza really finishes the poem of nicely. good stuff! |
I can feel this poem. I know exactly what you mean when you say that your sitting in the sunshine but still deep in the shadows. Very nice rythm. Theres always a new day behind a corner but you have to tell yourself that and let the past go. |
by k
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