Dis is my most resent poem please leave a coment then i wil visit you poems!:):):)

AWWW i really really love this... its so cute

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your a great writter bub !!

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Gawjuss hun... reli feeling it... thanks 4 my comment xx

Nice poem!!

read my poems please
thankyou!

Very good poem~ 5/5

Very moving 5/5

Hey, it's a good poem, you could probably do with splitting it into stanzas to make it easier to read but the content is good. :D xx

Iknow the feeling, I let the one I love know that I love her 3 years later and everyday I beat myself up about it, because I eventuallyl ost her and now I'm on a mission to find her.

Thts really nice too!!!

God bless u

I loved it, it was great! Verry emotional. I was able to relate to it at one point in my life. It would be much better if it had more vocab in it though, but otherwise it was great! I give it 5/5

-John

5/5 wow i really loved every word of thiz poem...u are really good at wrting

It was a great poem, I really like it. Just a suggestion to split it into stanzas :) I'll PM you the suggestions okay :)

Awww....that was just beautiful!!! i really loved it and i can relate it sooo much. so keep your head up and everything will get better!!!5/5

I can relate to this poem at this very momment lol well you are a very great write i really loved this poem well keep up the umm great work
luv ya,
Christina

I really like this poem since i can always relate to it..that girl always seems to be me...

Amie

I love the poem it was very good. I know exactly how you feel. I would say with age comes wisdom but sometimes you have to go through it ur self. But all i can say is i feel you good job.

Wow! this is really good!

Awe! This is sweet, and actually really good.
Well done!

5/5

Ii l0ve this p0em.. m0st deff goin in to ma favorites!!!!! l0ve it.. keep ^ them gudd poems

ily

shortiie

A beautiful poem.
Full of emotions.
Very well written.
Love it.