Here i am im just me

by gemowski   May 3, 2006


Here i am I'm just me,
but can't see that clearly,
you put me down you make me frown, you knock my feet right off the ground,

why do you do this to me, then leave me alone,
feeling down
after knocking my feet from the ground.

every moment of everyday, you're in my thought,
just a memory,

and just when i think I'm over you , you call me up out the blue,
and me being me i fall for you all over again,
but this time worst, my love times ten.

i want to be strong, but it all goes wrong
when i think of you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Suggestions: Revise Grammar, break up lines, try and stray from the usual rhymes and repition of unnessary words. Mabe go into more detail. Exclaimation points scream words. Try and avoid them if you can.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    We all have that one person who can shake our resolve and change our minds about things and it is hard to deny them and what they want I wish you the best of luck and hope you don't share my fate