A Lonely Suicide

by Stephen   May 3, 2006


A lonely night a desperate cry
i sit in my room and try
to forget my pain and sorrow
should i go on? to live tomorow
i grab the knife my head tilts back
it can be all over with one quick slash
i press down onto my throat
should i proceed? i've lost all hope
i take a moment to think again
why i decided my life should end
it tears my heart to think about it
so i cut my throat without a doubt...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    Its rele gd, i kno how it feels to b there

  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    Its rele gd, i kno how it feels to b there

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I liked it. Sounds like what I am going through.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is good. 5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    I like your poem so I gave it a 5. but its very dark. Maybe you need someone to talk to, maybe write more poems. I'd love to read them sometime. Read some of mine and keep in touch.