Lost Love

by XxTearDropxX   May 3, 2006


Is it that obvese that I'm still in love
with a guy i thought was sent from above
but really he was sent from down below
dam this guy can put on a show
he loves you one day the next hes gone
but really i thought was the love i won
i should have known it from the start
because the first time you broke my heart
now he trys to talk to me
i don't know how stupid he can be
he lost my love he lost it all
now i watch him as he falls
i cant believe miss him so much
i miss the feeling of his soft gentle touch
oh well i realize our love is lost
but that sucks, i payed the whole cost

please tell me the truth, was it good or bad?

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    I really liked it! good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by XxbekkaxX

    I really like this poem. i can relate a whole bunch! i'v been in one of thoes relationships before and they hurt. but i like this poem, you're a goo author!!

    XxbekkaxX

  • 17 years ago

    by XxbekkaxX

    I can most defentally relate. i'v been in one of thoes relationships before, and they really do hurt. i like it, i like your poems!!!

    XxbekkaxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    I like your use of words.... you play nicely with them. Keep it up!!

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    It wasnt good....it was friggin awesome! lol
    i really like this poem alot!