This is pretty good!!! keep it up! :)

Oh wow, this one is as great as the other one. I loved the theme of this poem of yours, a unique one. Yes, I know exactly what you mean. I also had a friend like that who I still adore very much. Excellent piece once again.

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Michelle

Oh, funky monkey! I love this poem it's shows so much in it i can't explain how but it just does.
It reflects emotions and how you kinda feel lol. It's a great poem, keep it up and it's good that u dedicated it to some one too..
xoxroxyxox great job hun!!