Mr.Heartbroken

by White Blizzard   May 3, 2006


I'm a man with class,
Emotions that could smash like glass

I've been around for many of years,
To wipe off your warm tears

I have enjoyed looking at you,
Although its been done through and through

Sometimes I don't know what to say
To make your feelings go away.

I really want you back,
When you say No it makes my heart crack.

You tell me that our love no longer matters,
When you say that, my heart crumbles and shatters.

My heart shattered true for you,
However that's something you blew.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    This is also unique!! i love ur style of writing, and im definatly adding u to my favorites list!! keep it up!!
    ttyl
    Raychel

  • 18 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    That's amazing. I like it a lot. Better than all of my poems. = ) your really good. Keep it up!

    --Summer

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I understand this was intended as heartfelt and sophisticated, but it seems quite childish.
    Some of your couplets aren't as impressive because the rhyming interferes with the meaning.
    Althought you're trying, I think you have a long way to go.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Amz

    Yet another good poem...so full of emotion..:)

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