Yet another good poem...so full of emotion..:)

I understand this was intended as heartfelt and sophisticated, but it seems quite childish.
Some of your couplets aren't as impressive because the rhyming interferes with the meaning.
Althought you're trying, I think you have a long way to go.x

That's amazing. I like it a lot. Better than all of my poems. = ) your really good. Keep it up!

--Summer

This is also unique!! i love ur style of writing, and im definatly adding u to my favorites list!! keep it up!!
ttyl
Raychel