The Rag Doll

by Kaylee   May 3, 2006


Desolate soul tiptoeing shattered glass.
Moonlight splashing vacant hollow eyes.
Desire heart! Steal storm clouds from me.
Bogged down with rain—internal sheets.
Rag doll drowning beneath these waves.

Forsaken spirit, breathe windswept dirt.
Stained with raindrops, tears glued to skin.
Always on stand! Mind clouded with guilt.
Body on trial—Record loss, forever accused.
Rag doll drug through their muddy waters.

Morning sun glides upon this moment,
resting on the torn and tattered rag doll.
Over there! Young teenager stands waiting.
“Thank you.”—Has she found a listener?
Light blurs my vision to reveal she is gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Omg. I can't believe I hadn't commented this before. Wow.

    This was really good, Kaylee. I'm stunned right now. Alot of people write about feeling like a rag doll, and usually they all sound the same, but this poem, wow. It's great, and really different. Loved it! Great job! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was very powerful and intense! i just wanted to thank you for the honest coment you gave me! you are one of my favourite people to get comments from because you always tell me the truth and if you dont like something you will tell me! so thnx so much, because i know this really helps me improve! anyway, back to the poem..loL! this was my favourite line, it was so imaginative, i l.o.v.e.d it!

    Stained with raindrops, tears glued to skin.

    keep up the excellent writing! xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is good..i liked it...makes me think...great job..keep it up, take er easy..cool perspective on it
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is a wonderful poem. I liked the style very much.

  • 18 years ago

    by She was j u s t another g i r l

    WOW dat was deep yet so simple - its jus like a girl..her heart i love it keep writing your great!!

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