Deep, powerful and poetic!! Girl you rock!!!!!!! This is one of ma favorites that you have written (of the ones I have read so far).
Very mystical and intriguing showing raw emotion and providing inspiration!

This is really good & very descriptive. It kind of left me confused like I didn't really know what was going on. but overall it is really great.. the flow & rhythm were very good & really helped bring out the emotions. Great job! 5/5**

I'm a big fan of rhyming. Although, this poem doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it still heald my attention. Good job.

I'll get the rest of the comments out soon!

This poem was filled with wonderful expressive and discriptive imagery. You took so older discriptions, added in your own, twisted it all together and came out with a brilliant poem. Nice work.

-Tainted

Ugh! this poem was beauitful completely loved it line to line

Damn... Powerful, deep and very emotional. Impressive writing :)

Really powerful write. Great imagery here! I really loved this poem of yours! Even without a use of rhyme it flows beautifully, The final two lones for me were the most striking, as the poem finally introduces the possiblitly of reconcilliation and hope; which is subsequently torn away "she is gone" Great stuff. Evocative and moving, 5/5 x

I like this poem, keep writing. much love
XxImnotdeadxX

Wow- don't change a thing, this is a fantastic write. The language is beautifully used and the imagery is spot-on. The poem flows and for me was a pleasure to read. It screams talent, keep writing.

Descriptive and wonderfully written with some fantastic use of imegry. the expressions are powerfull and the structure well composed. overall a fantastic peice with some billiant lines and well used ideas.

5/5

Awesome write...
5/5... nothing less...
nice flow
good rythm
great content
love
amy

I didnt like it. i dont understand the point of it.

Wow..This poem was very deep and powerful! I loved every line of it! Very Good! 5/5

Aweh this is totally amzing

i love all the wording in it
i saw that there was a hidden message orsomething
im not sure

but it sounds like
something to do with drug abuse?
i dont know

well 5/5 for this

This was a really good write.
I'm really tired.. so I will read more of your poetry later : P

Great imagry.. and this line...

"Moonlight splashing vacant hollow eyes."

amazing, just beautifull!

Awesome,so Perfect poem..i liked it so much..ur words were so strong and expressed sadness in a very beautiful way..keep up da good work..5/5

Omg! this is very deep! its so good and thoughtful!

I love it

Amanda*

WOW dat was deep yet so simple - its jus like a girl..her heart i love it keep writing your great!!