Life of Our Own

by Simon Hayes   May 3, 2006


This passion burns inside my heart,
It overflows with emotion.
Your radiant, enchanting smile
Like a fantastic healing potion.

My destiny lies in your hands,
Our love to be the mold.
Freedom ours for the taking,
Greatest love story ever told.

Lets go somewhere secluded,
Experience tranquility.
Just you and me in love
Along side our liberty

We can reside for all eternity,
In a place that we call home.
Mother and father of our child.
A family of our own

© Simon Hayes 03/05/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Interesting... Sweet & romantic. It's good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Beautiful heartfelt poem Simon . The way you've used the use of those 10 words is amazing . I love this poem . As well did the judges . And I can see why , my friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww! This is sooo beautiful. It's mellifluous wordw are simply breathtaking. Lovely word from a lovely soul

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Simply beautiful write simon, very touching yet so heartfelt emotion....well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lets go somewhere secluded,
    Experience tranquility.
    Just you and me in love
    Along side our liberty

    ^^^ i was smiling by this stanza Sie! Beautiful write, I never walk away after reading your work displeased!!
    Chels

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