by Holly
Wow. Another good one! Keep it up, you're doing a wicked good job! 5/5 |
by Mousie
I'm gonna agree with diana60... it is good and you have a great start... the first stanza was great... just maybe shorten the others... it was really good though... and yeah, i'm talking to the other guy (not my ex) right now, and he's being great tonight, so we'll just hope that something might happen! |