This is really good! It is very emotional. Great job on this! You are very talented! Keep up the good work!!

Nice job, you can try adding more imagery. Keep it up

This is really good. Simple and to the point. 5/5 keep writing x

Aww! i love your poems! they are short but still contain as much emotion! you really hav a talent!
jessy

Wow that is rly good i rly do like it. ur an awesome poet keep up the good work...5/5!

Wow that was reallly nice!...sad...but it showed alot of meaning!...very nice job....loved it! 5/5

Great poem....amazing lines...it was so touching...i guess its because i am going through a bad break up....Great job though...
Emma 5/5

Again another great piece i know how u feel.
good work hun

keep um coming

gema

xoxox

That is so sad and powerful even though it is a short one. You are very talented and i do hope that you are ok. Amanda :)

This poem was really good!! I love how it is simple eay to read and to the point, and still have alot of emotion!!! Great Work!!

Keep it up! :-)

Seems like I totally forgot I read your previous poem. So I'm reading this one to make up for it. (Mother's Day Poem)

This was short, but it went right to the point. Full of strong emotions. You can't be hurt forever, unless you are talking about physical pain. Emotional pain eventually goes away with time, so chin up :)

Ah..I can relate, not sure about the rest of the Team. But I can. Wonderful poem.

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You have a real knack for writing... your poems are short, but when i'm looking at all of these, it's quick and easy... i enjoy them all... keep up the good work... i just hope i never have to experience what you just explained, even though i know every girl experiences a heartbreak

Thankx for the comment!

...this is one of the saddest poems i've read in a long time. i hope you are okay. stay strong, ok? This is a great poem, you've really got some talent.