Metal Mist

by Andy loves Jesus   May 3, 2006


I can't see what lies ahead.
I feel pain and faint now instead.
Thinking I could have left a mess.
Thinking I'd never have to confess.
The wounds don't stop here.
The don't end when I fear.
It's only just began today.
And it will make me have to stay.
It's blocking my vision good.
I used my imagination like I could.
Dark sweeps over my veins.
And squirts mist along with pain.
The dark side of loosing control.
Is it never returns you your soul.
The metal mist has taken on me.
Destroying the exit so I can't flee.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    NICE!! lota emotion

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    WOw i loved it
    emotion is swirling throughout the poem
    it was great
    ~HazE