by Gangsta Flangsta May 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
This is my first ever poem i have posted on this website and it may not seem that great but i stand by my work and i pray that you'll and comment on it!! Thanks again! |
by Rylee
I loved your rhyming, this poem is really good! good luck on your next poem! |
Thanks you guys i'll check out some of your poems too!! I'm working on my next one so enjoy this one for a while!! |
by Nyx
Hey preetty good i like the last line its words are powerful and just out there |
by Chelsey
Wow i loved the rythm and rhyming, for your first poem posting it was very good ;) |