Wow i loved the rythm and rhyming, for your first poem posting it was very good ;)

-please go check out mine

Hey preetty good i like the last line its words are powerful and just out there

Thanks you guys i'll check out some of your poems too!! I'm working on my next one so enjoy this one for a while!!

I loved your rhyming, this poem is really good! good luck on your next poem!