by Nicole May 4, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
A single blood red petal |
by ari
Oh, ok. i'll try and work on it on my other poems. thanx for the advice. i appreciate it! |
by ari
By more structured, what do you mean? |
by Bridgette
This is really good! It's got a great rhyme scheme.. great flow.. & it's very descriptive. Great job on this! 5/5*** |
This is really descriptive and deep. I like it. Good use of words and rhymes. Lurve it! |