Very intresting style of writing i've never seen any thing like it before its very unique but the reason i like it was for the truth of emotion in it because emotion is what makes a poem a poem not rhyme scheme or style but emotion and this was so heart felt and in its sadness it was beautful

Really good poem i liked it alot..lots of emotion

Omg girl i love this poem its the awsomest!!! jus like u!
love ya
~*~ not loved ~*~

Cool i liek it alot

I agree with Cody, this is an interesting type of writing. It's very creative, except the topic is a little over-used. I'm not saying the poem is bad, I really like it.

It has a lot of emotion, maybe not over-whelming, but I'm satisfied.

Great job.

That was awesome

Cool i like the way you write
it means a lot of things
a sad poem.
your such a good writter
keep it up girl
and your poems sings

This is a gr8 poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxoxox
Jess

This is so deep..wow. i love it..almsot made me cry. keep it up hun ur sooo good.

Lissa xoox