Graved

This so sad but full of passion. ur reeally good.

Your beautiful face
And beautiful smile
It's what brought me the hope
kept me going mile after mile

I agree with Lauren. You don't deserve that. I say that because you seem nice and highly respectable! I love this part of the poem the most! ^ ^ ^ ^

This is a really really really good poem!

That's so sad, danny! you don't deserve this! but these things happen to the people who deserve them least...
just remember to stay strong...someone a lot better will come by you. you'll just have to learn to forget the past and let go...
something i haven't figured out, yet. but when i do i'll be glad to help you.
oh, and beautiful poem.
Lauren

Thanks......