Lost

by Jason   May 4, 2006


I'm lost,
I can't find my way home,
When will this all end?
My strength is starting to bend,

All I need is someone to show me the way,
One who will never betray,
Everything I see is dim,
Cast this grim shadow of mine away,
When will the sun shine on me?

I walk through this dark forest,
Alone and lonely,
My only companions are my demons,
I hear their screams,
I need the sound of an angel,
Let my angel sing

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  • 18 years ago

    by apoet

    Very good, there's not much (if anything) that I would change to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by EVIL_TEASE

    Well i thought it was very good a lil different from the ones i read but hey i liked it just the sam keep up the awsome work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    An excellent poem, Jason. Very emotive and atmospheric. Well done.

    Much love and God bless,
    Fallen-

  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    I love that u show passion in these poems
    love claire xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Cast this grim shadow of mine away,
    When will the sun shine on me?

    i love those lines... you are a talented poet. good work, mate.

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