Uncontrollable

by Lollypop   May 4, 2006


Uncontrollable.
That's what my life's about.
Walking down the path
That has no turnabout.

The Devil's mocking voice
Is ringing in my ear.
Telling me I'm worthless,
Nothing else can I hear.

I need to escape,
Have to get away.
And I know,
There is no other way.

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  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Pretty good poem.. not too long not too short..perfect. very well written.. keep it up.
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    Your title needs to be different i believe. other than that i like your poem. good work.xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I agree with † Bleeding Demons † I think the title doesnt fit try something like Uncontrollable. Just a thought.

    Rach ♥

    Hope everything is okay.

  • 18 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Its A good write i dunno if the title fits though just a sugestion either write your poem then title it or title a poem then write around it ok just an idea Its still a good poem

    Mike

  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I love your poem it may be shourt but it gets to the point. keep writing ~silent eyes~

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