by Dead Eyes May 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
He's burning in the frozen fire of his own eyes |
by Elynnka
I liked the last stanza best ;) |
by MemoirsOfMe
I like this one. It was different and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved some of the internal rhymes you put in! Though, just a small critique, some of your end rhymes was forced so it altered the flow of it a bit. Otherwise, I liked it. Keep Writing! |
by Erika
I like it, I usually am interested in love poems, or happy poems, but for some reason today I just felt like reading a fantasy one, and it was great, I totally loved it! |
I really like it..it's gorgeous and it's full of emotions and passion...as u are...*hugs him* |