I really like it..it's gorgeous and it's full of emotions and passion...as u are...*hugs him*

I like it, I usually am interested in love poems, or happy poems, but for some reason today I just felt like reading a fantasy one, and it was great, I totally loved it!

I like this one. It was different and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved some of the internal rhymes you put in! Though, just a small critique, some of your end rhymes was forced so it altered the flow of it a bit. Otherwise, I liked it. Keep Writing!

I liked the last stanza best ;)
5/5